Solved: I Need Someone To Edit Or Revise This Email And See If My Resume Is Good

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Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Jasmine Bailey and I am very interested indeed ecstatic about wanting to work for Yogurtland. Along with, its my favorite yogurt/ice cream place that I frequently get- the Birthday Batter is one of my favorite flavored yogurt. Also, importantly, I believe I am the best fit for this job